I think I’m going to try to make Hux a more effective villian. His first line is “I have orders from Supreme Leader Snoke himself”. I question why that line is necessary, and I believe removing it will make him appear more threatening.
Post #1158059
- Author
- Handman
- Parent topic
- The Last Jedi: A Light Edit (DISCONTINUED) (* unfinished project *)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1158059/action/topic#1158059
- Date created
- 14-Jan-2018, 7:36 PM