Really cool! Another thing I wonder about is if cutting out the “alright” in the middle of the line would help everything gel better. Aside from the volume discrepancy, the other thing that sticks out about the line is that Hayden is talking noticeably faster than in the rest of the scene. “You weren’t there…I did what I had to do” might sound more consistently paced, like two more of the kinds of declarations he’s already saying in the official movie (if that makes sense).