Without going into too much detail, I agree about the “entire planet” line and “the situation has become much more complicated.” The rest… no thanks. 😃

Please do, however, send me the samples you mention. I don’t think I’ll use the one about Jar Jar and the “secret place,” since we wouldn’t have seen their underwater home anyway. I will still keep the underwater sequence out of the edit, for the reasons I took it out to begin with. It’s the Canto Bight of TPM. 😛