I don’t know how I’d improve on the lightsaber battle. I had some ideas the other night about how Rey might appear to Kylo Ren near the end. The image in my mind was that Rey could take on a more menacing appearance as a result of channeling what is pretty clearly the Dark Side, and Ren is so taken aback by this that he cedes ground to her in surprise and fear. But it’s not a priority for this edit, since I think it was done fairly competently in the original version.
I was watching Ironman23’s TFA edit, and he cut out a few shots before they reach the cliff and after Rey goes into overpowered mode more towards the end of the fight, and I actually really liked how it turned out. Better than the original form. It makes it more believable to me, I think. Because she just wins, and barely now, instead of literally kicking his butt.
I have the link for his edit, so PM me if you’d want to watch it.
He also takes out several bad joke attempts that I thoroughly agree with. But I really just commented because of the lightsaber fight thing.