I agree with most of these changes. But just remove the entire canto bite sequence. i watched the flim twice they explain to poe what happened to them so the entire sequnce is pointless

I think the focus needs to be on rey luke kylo ren and snoke try to minimize the poe arc just a little bit minor changes
Also remove some of the jokes when we need a serious tone
Like when luke sees r2d2 remove the joke when luke says cheap move just have luke sit there in shock.

Also remove the middle school kiss just cut after she says we need to save the things we love.