I read the list again to try and make sure I was treading new ground, and I noticed that you were going to add back in, the old female pilots. While in principle I agree with the idea, have you seen the actual footage? Their acting is just bad. They kept looking at camera, they would say the lines, but not mean them and there was no body language. Now before you said “Existing female pilot to be re-dubbed with a female voice” you also said “Add female pilots” which I’m assuming means there will be new actresses doing the whole thing as well? If so, I would stick to just that, because I’m not sure that just dubbing the old ones will work. And if you aren’t going to re-shoot them then… IDK are bad ones better than no ones??

Anyway if its fixing movie mistakes you want then here’s a few that have been going around for a while:
A) Vader cuts through a railing that is already cut in the final battle.
B) DV’s shuttle arrives, a DS technician’s hand is gloved but when it cuts between shots and he presses a button it isn’t.
C) Jaba’s Drink switch hands when he drags Leia over on the sail barge.
D) Billy D William’s stunt double is wearing black gloves when he is dangling from ropes in during the sarlac scene.
E) They flip the Han/Lando scene on Home One so that Landos badge and strap switch sides.
F) When Leia offers Wicket food it switches hands.
G) One of the Ewoks eyes is missing and you can see the actor when they first meet C3PO
H) A post moves when Luke is talking to Vader on Endor.
All of these are from: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MKe-9TpM7IM
IDK why I listed them instead of just linking it but I’ve done it now.
The only other thing I can think of is the X-rays of DV when he is electrocuted… Its just a bit weird but IDK also endearing maybe make his limbs seem robotic instead of just bone or remove or whatever.