I’d get rid of any cutesy/comedy moments involving the Ewoks.
Remove any burp jokes in the film.
Do something about the droid torture scene - make it more serious.
Prune back any cut-away shots to Salacious Crumb laughing.
Post #1151729
- Author
- Slavicuss
- Parent topic
- Return of the Jedi: A Gentle Pruning (* unfinished project *)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1151729/action/topic#1151729
- Date created
- 31-Dec-2017, 3:57 PM