Liamnotneeson: I appreciate the honesty in your opinion, but as stated over at fanedit.org and in the YouTube video example, that dialogue is not finished. Dialogue needed was not created at that time. It was a scene showcasing tone and feel of the movie.
Also, for future criticisms - although in good spirit, I’d appreciate if you tried to maintain polite. Screaming things like worst dialogue ever and far worse than anything else at an unifinished product just comes across as inpolite and cocky. I know it’s probably not meant that way.