While it is pretty abrupt, I wouldn’t remove the dialog.
I feel like that if I can convey the same info in an earlier scene it would be better to have this scene be silent. If the other scene can’t be included, then the dialogue will stay.
While it is pretty abrupt, I wouldn’t remove the dialog.
I feel like that if I can convey the same info in an earlier scene it would be better to have this scene be silent. If the other scene can’t be included, then the dialogue will stay.