I really liked the clip. I felt like the audio was a bit “abrupt” when Obi-Wan started talking, and it “breaks off” with the tradition of every SW movie end with a silent scene, but ultimately I’m ok with it. Great job.
I agree with the abruptness, but if people think that the dialogue ruins the scene I’ll remove it. Thanks for the support.
JEDIT: On second thought, I think that I’ll remove the dialogue.
I will need to implement a replacement for the Yoda scene somehow (telling Obi Wan that he will train Anakin), possibly in the council chambers right before we cut to the sunset scene, but I don’t know.
You must do what you think it’s right, of course.
Edit: what I mean is don’t go changing things because of feedback, I for example am really interested in your vision.