For me, I hated this movie but I can see myself trying to improve it. The goal of my edit would be to focus the film on Luke, Kylo, and Rey.
Cut “Canto Bight” subplot: Was pointless to the film and only served to pad runtime. (To be replaced by deleted scenes of Luke training Rey perhaps?) We pick up with Finn and Rose talking to JD in hyperspace.
Move the throne room sequence to after The Resistance lands on Crait.
Cut Poe’s “Prank Call” to Hux
Make Luke more heroic
Minimize “Marvel-Style” humor
That’s for starters.
Nailed it. How about make a new Opening Crawl add one sentence to the Crawl
Poe is in trouble for getting people killed in battle cut the entire opening sequence and start the film off with Rey and Luke