Creating more distance from the mic, making sure the recording syncs up even better with the video, and placing more emphasis on the “re” of recharged are all things I’ll do in the next recording!
To be honest, the original doesn’t sound very urgent and I tried to copy that, but there’s always room for improvement. I’ll just have to work within the limitations of syncing up with the video. Thanks for the feedback everyone!
And if people think the audio quality is good as it is, I’ll continue working with the equipment I have.