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Post #1147370

Author
Tomo
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
22-Dec-2017, 3:34 PM

The voice sounds good, but my feedback would be that the word “recharged” sounds a little strange, almost like 'rich’arged instead of 'ree’charged, though that might just be me (someone with an Oxford English accent). I also think a bit more urgency would fit the scene better, it seems qute relaxed as is. Very nit-picky stuff, but I thought I’d offer any feedback I could. Definitely not much room for improvement though!