I love the opening crawl except for one word: defected. Galen escaped, he didn’t defect to another cause, so “deserter” or “escaped scientist” would be accurate and fit better I think.
Post #1145984
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- phreatobite
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- Rise of the Rebellion: A Rogue One Edit (Released)
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- 20-Dec-2017, 5:53 AM