The last of the Jedi Knights
has vanished. In his absence,
a sinister FIRST ORDER has
risen from the fallen Empire,
constructing a weapon that
can devour entire stars.

Haunted by visions of this
deadly threat, General
Leia Organa mobilizes a
covert Resistance to search
for her long-lost brother,
now her only hope to save
the new Republic.

On a daring mission to the
high priest of the Church of the Force,
Leia’s most trusted pilot
has discovered a clue
to the last Jedi’s fate,
while far overhead,
evil approaches…

I modified the third paragraph to sort of show what I think might be good. It’s just an idea, but I’m curious about your thoughts.

Likewise, what do you think about the Starkiller’s weapon. It would serve much like the Starbuster/Centerpoint Station in the Corellian Trilogy from the old EU.