That dialogue is far from the finished idea, it's just a 'predraft' of what I would do to get you seeing what I am thinking. All previous Vader references are removed and replaced with 'Skywalker' or 'young 'Skywalker'.
"My New Apprentice, Lord Vader can you hear me. "
"Yes, my master. Where is Obi-Wan Kenobi?"
"You have done well, Lord Vader."
"I can sense his presence"
"Patience. In time he will seek you out.."
"What is thy bidding, my Master?"
"Rise!"
Then have Vader bust off of the table, but instead of showing him reaching up and screaming as the final shot, just cut to Palps face smiling and laughing.
There, is that better? All of that dialogue is in the following films.