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Post #1138506

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NeverarGreat
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
5-Dec-2017, 12:49 PM

Nice to see it coming together!

Some notes:

  • I can still hear a bit of the old theme during Han’s Death.
  • Poe’s look at the weapon firing could use a lot more red color correction.
  • It would be good if the sound of the exploding planet could be extended to fade into the shot of Leia.
  • Hux’s first line could definitely use a ‘Supreme Leader’ before it, perhaps beginning from the previous shot of the Oscillator.
  • I’m sure the final shot of Hux won’t be so small going forward 😉