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Post #1136882

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Valheru_84
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TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
1-Dec-2017, 10:54 AM

DominicCobb said:

NeverarGreat said:

Jump St version 2:
https://vimeo.com/245234854
Password: jump

Seems just about perfect to me.

I think the “falcon breaking down” noise could be a little louder as they drop out of hyperspace, I barely heard it as the ship moves away from the camera. I definitely like the idea though.

I also found the sudden cut after Finn asks whats wrong with it to be a bit jarring, dont know whether its worth allowing Rey to answer first and then cut to the falcon dropping from Hyperspace with the break down noise playing as it actually drops out, being the cause of it dropping from hyperspace?

.Val