Looks like all these transitions would work well - I think the TIEs over the mountains establishing shot would help with Rey’s introduction though, and the transition from Han to the base is a little odd. Too quick, maybe?
Post #1135975
- Author
- NeverarGreat
- Parent topic
- TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1135975/action/topic#1135975
- Date created
- 28-Nov-2017, 9:39 PM