I’m not sure about the idea for restructuring Rey’s escape for the moment, but here is what NeverarGreat’s proposed ordering of scenes would look like:
Resistance Base
Weapon Charging
Battle Plans
Farewells
Interrogation
Snoke
Landing at Lightspeed
password for all clips: scene
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