First of all, good job on the scene, it’s as good as I could imagine it getting with the resources at our disposal.

However, the reason I abandoned that short Snoke scene was because there were too many weird things about it, such as the complete lack of acknowledgement about the Republic’s destruction, further keeping Snoke in the dark about First Order information (when were they going to tell him about that reconnaissance ship?!), and the brevity of the scene makes it seem too perfunctory and ad hoc. It’s certainly serviceable though, so it’s better than nothing if it comes to that.

JEDIT:
I’m glad people like the Starlight mockups. I’m a big fan of keeping the focus on Rey as much as possible, and trying to imply that she’s learning over an extended period of time through Ren’s interrogations. Even though the discussion has moved on a bit, I had made this mockup just this morning:
https://vimeo.com/244699807
Password: rey

This follows the sequence:
Resistance Base
Weapon Charging
Interrogations
Snoke (reconnaissance tracking)
Failed Mind Trick
Battle Plans
Farewells
Successful Mind Trick
Landing from Hyperspace

Of course, the necessity of keeping the charging-Battle Plans connection renders this rather moot.