Here’s the sequence I’m looking at:
Resistance Base
Weapon Charging
Battle Plans
Farewell
Rey’s Interrogation
Snoke
Rey Escapes
Landing at Hyperspace
Since the bolded sections must stay together, Rey’s interrogation must fall on one side of them or the other. I feel like we’re away from her almost too long in the Theatrical version, so at least part of the interrogation should happen before the weapon charging. However, since Snoke’s scene should happen after the charging, there’s no natural way to include her in this section of the film. That’s a problem if Rey’s still supposed to be the main character.
So either the bolded section must be split somehow, or Rey’s interrogation must be split into two sections, with one before the bolded section.
Here’s an old mockup of how such a split could happen, just disregard the sequence: https://vimeo.com/214598035
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