I know I said this last time, but I can’t imagine tweaking it to be any better than this:

https://vimeo.com/244452730
password: listen

The word “immediately” was originally part of a larger sentence, “…find BB8 immediately…” and I cannot get it to sound any better than NeverarGreat did. The space between this word and, “Our future may depend on it,” actually had to be spaced out a little, making it very difficult to smooth over the background noise without a very distinct and jarring repetition (like when a digital audio file glitches).
I was, however, able to fix the problem with the “insane” line and think that portion of the scene sounds pretty good now.
To my eyes, the colors look beautiful, but if NeverarGreat desires to try to tweak them further, I will use whatever is deemed best.