With the caveat that I’m once again watching these clips with my phone’s speaker, I think that one looks and sounds pretty much perfect! 😄

I’m not super sold on the two wipes so close together thing, I think a hard cut would work fine from the space shot to the shot on the surface, but I think you said there was a reason behind that and I don’t think it’s weird enough to totally take me out of the movie. If you can find a way to avoid the second wipe that’d be awesome, but I think I can get used to it pretty quickly if you can’t.