Post #113126

Author: Darth Chaltab
Parent topic: Another Fan-Fic (My sincerest apologies to starkiller) - SW crossover
Link to post in topic: https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/113126/action/topic#113126
Date created: 8-Jun-2005, 7:50 AM

So far it's not bad. A few grammar mistakes and it jumps around--which means you assume very intimate familiarity with the end of Return of the Jedi. And at least there is no Uber-Gary-Stu like in Starkiller's fic (No offense man

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Funny. I guess naming first chapters after plays on "A Series of Unfortunate Events" is rather common; See what I mean?