You should also add paragraph breaks. It’s hard to read in a clump like that.
But why would you even bother to read it?
He changed it to look like that. It used to be a (properly wrapped around) wall of text.
My point is there’s no reason to bother reading anything that starts with “I think Star Wars fans are the worst.”
I only bothered to scan it, really. And I bothered more about the wall of text with no punctuation. But when he moved it over here from Off Topic, I took a longer glance and saw something about people hating on him for liking TFA.