Post #112257

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Originally posted by: twister111
I think that if plagius was Anakin's creator then the dialog should have been something like this:

Anakin: Your the Lord of the sith.
Siddious: Yes, yes I am. I was also, the apprentince of Plegius.
*Siddious leans into the lightsaber like he was going to behead himself then Anakin changes the direction of the lightsaber to have it just at Siddious's neck*
Siddious(continuing): The one that munipulated the midicholorians to create you.
Anakin: What!?
Siddious: I found out that he was going to create you to kill you Anakin. So, I destroyed him when he had his guard down.
Anakin: Your lying!
Siddious(said with fastness and, great emphasis): IT IS THE TRUTH!
Everyone else is lying to you and, you don't believe the person who tells you truth?
*wipe so that we have a cliffhanger in the story*

I think that this would have been a good addition. Since, it shows that Siddious thinks that Anakin will never harm him(with the lightsaber thing), it makes his turn even more believeable, his line "I need him" has even more emphasis, and his "what have I done" is more believeable as, well. Since, he had to choose between the one that saved him(or, so he thinks) or, a mentor that has helped him grow.

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