Originally posted by: maddog00
Plus, make the lizard less talky. I swear, it seemed like that thing was making noise every 10 seconds.

And it makes exactly the same sounds as those aliens in pitch black

Originally posted by: ADigitalMan
Here's what I've (re) written for III at this point. Since I have, like, six months to work on this, it may change of course. Especially if we find it won't fit. Hopefully it will fit just fine.
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Episode III
Revenge of the Sith

The Clone Wars have ravaged
the galaxy. The Republic is
crumbling under attacks from
Lord Darth Tyrannus, the
fallen Jedi Count Dooku.

In a stunning move, fiendish
leader of the Droid Army
General Grievous has swept into
the capital and kidnapped
Chancellor Palpatine, leader of
the Galactic Senate.

As the Separatists flee
with their valuable hostage,
Jedi Knights Obi-Wan Kenobi
and Anakin Skywalker lead a
desperate mission to rescue the
captive Chancellor...
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You should definetely put in the first word "WAR!"! I think this is kinda needed when the movie starts and something like the "drums of war" asound from the soundtrack (I hope you get what I mean, I'm not a natural english speaker).

And for the extended scenes:
Maybe one of you could put in the nude Bai Ling scene just for fun?