Seconded. That seems perfect to me.
JEDIT: Possibly change “…would be war” to “…would mean war”? Seems slightly more natural to me.
Post #1118488
- Author
- ChainsawAsh
- Parent topic
- TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1118488/action/topic#1118488
- Date created
- 14-Oct-2017, 10:40 PM