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Post #1118221

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DominicCobb
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
14-Oct-2017, 3:58 AM

If the point is to explain why people are hesitant to freak out when the star destroyer appears, the second is better. Hypothetically they both mean the same thing, but it wouldn’t necessarily play that way. When the First Order attacks and Finn isn’t safe there two minutes later, it’s a contradiction. The latter option makes it clearer that it’s a purposeful contradiction (the subtler option is tough when it’s such a brief exchange and moves so quickly to the next thing).