Just watched this. Very good work throughout. There was one place that was jarring to me, however. It was the cut from the deleted scene of Harry and Hermione discussing how Draco looked ill, straight to Slughorn’s fake memory. It comes out of nowhere, and maybe it was similar in the original version, but I had to rewind and watch it again just to make sure I wasn’t missing anything.
But that’s really all that feels off.