I'm not sure how i'd edit that part, I wish there was a way to entirely remove all the Boga/Wheelbike action, and as little seen of that Lizard the better.
I'd like to see Kenobi land on Utapau, talk to Tion, stay as his fighter leaves, then it cut to another scene on Coruscant, when cut back to Utapau show parts of Greivious talking to members of the trade federation (eliminating the lizard riding sequence) with Kenobi watching then jumping down...after this I would edit seqments of the dialogue/duel....but then after the Clones arrive, I'm stuck on how to get those two characters from point A to B without that dueling on Lizard Wheelbike segment.
Anyone have any further ideas?.
Something I considered with the Vader scene, is doing a fade when the Emperor has a smile on his face right after Vader busts loose from the table...The Noooo and the Al Jolson gesturing don't really need to be in there, I think it's just failed extra dramatics....the fade would have to have great timing or it would seem too rushed.
The hair coming scene with Anakin/Padme I think everyone agrees, can be sliced right out of there.
I do quite a few snip edits with the Palpatine/Mace duel....As Palps spins through the air I'd keep only the sound of a spinning saber instead of Palps sounding like some rusty Tie Fighter...then have Palps instantly stab the first Jedi right after he lands (no standing around for a second delay).
I'd also Eliminate , some strange Palpatine facial expressions during his saber duel, as well The goofy mouthed Palpatine "nooo, nooo", it would just cut back from Mace to Palps saying "you will die" and shooting lighting.
Also gone are "What have I done", "Gooooood", most of the "don't listen to him" Mace/Palp type banter directed at Anakin....just alot of small dialogue edits would help the scene a great deal.