Thanks for the feedback guys! I will be sure to re-place the line at the beginning, but I think I’ll have it say “It is a period of open conflict”-- that way the line has more than a one-word difference from A New Hope’s opening line.

As for the “revelation”, I thought a lot about that. I obviously eventually put revelation, but I’m not sold on it. I definitely agree that revelations sounds better. The question is can we get away with it–any final thoughts on that?

JEDI: I didn’t see chainsaw’s post above until after I posted this (just FYI, I guess).