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Post #1109018

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JARUS5
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STAR WARS: EP VI -RETURN OF THE JEDI "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - ** PRODUCTION HAS NOW RESTARTED **
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18-Sep-2017, 10:18 PM

nhoj3 said:

Proposed Revisited ROTJ Opening Crawl (85 words, 7 more than original):

While his friends have scoured the galaxy for Han Solo, Luke Skywalker has evaded Darth Vader’s relentless pursuit by continuing his Jedi training on the secret planet of Dagobah.

With Han finally discovered in the lair of the vile gangster Jabba the Hutt, Luke has left his training once again to join his friends in a daring rescue attempt.

Little do they know that the GALACTIC EMPIRE has secretly been constructing a new armored space station even more powerful than the first dreaded Death Star…

Honestly, I find this to be the best course of action and its a lot less intrusive to the pacing of the film. I’ve always found the original episode 6 (and the prequel trilogy) crawl to be lacking a certain kind of punch that the other 2 had.