After hearing you say it is more of a blueprint than a truly polished edit, I will hold back some of my complaints. It is a bit rough, but I find using what I believe is the Hindi audio for Jar Jar to be inspired. You didn’t actually change the meaning of his dialog, but just the different voice made a big difference. I have only watched the first part of TPM, AOTC, and Clone Wars, but your edits are clearly an improvement. But you really do need a better audio source for Jar Jar’s lines. The one you used is kind of jarring at times. And you really need to replace everything Jar Jar says, not just his main dialog. But your edit of Kenobi and Skywalker’s dialog when they meet Padme in ATOC is right in line with what I’ve been thinking that scene needed. The master/padawan relationship shouldn’t take away from their friendship like it does in the theatrical cut.
Was that where he admonishes him in front of everyone? Yeah it was a little too mean and not master/padawan, like ‘this is business’ tone. PLus ani in ATOC is just a whine douche. I removed all his whinyness.
It’s like the scene in throne room - we’re supposed to believe they feel something for each other (padme and ani) and their biggest scene int he movie she belittles him and admonishes him in front of everyone. You can just FEEL the live there can’t you? lol The tone is sometimes just thrown right out the window and the story suffers… all because we needed more cgi lol