I think it’s great this way. The final shot of Sella is really necessary for the scene not to end too abruptly.
Post #1107477
- Author
- Kexikus
- Parent topic
- TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1107477/action/topic#1107477
- Date created
- 13-Sep-2017, 4:48 AM