I just watched it and I liked it a lot. I originally enjoyed Rogue One very much and thought it was a great movie in theaters.
I like your decisions you made and was a bit reserved on the removing Cassians first scene. I thought it was necessary to have it for his character, but after watching it … it was not absolutely needed. Everything else I like very much … But I personally missed the “I’m blind” line, it wasn’t forced like a good bit of the easter eggs that were added.
Anyway, I enjoyed it, good job!