When Leia says ‘take action against this First Order’, it sounds like she can’t decide between ‘this’ and ‘the’. I’m considering putting in a ‘the’ from elsewhere in her dialogue to fix this.
Post #1105634
- Author
- NeverarGreat
- Parent topic
- TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1105634/action/topic#1105634
- Date created
- 7-Sep-2017, 11:35 AM