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Post #1104448

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marduk666
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STAR WARS: EP VI -RETURN OF THE JEDI "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - ** PRODUCTION HAS NOW RESTARTED **
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4-Sep-2017, 9:28 AM

I know this won’t be considered but here goes nothing, suggestions are open

Edit the crawl to indicate there is a new death star and the emporer is overseeing the completion of DS2 Luke is training on dagobah, and the rebel alliance is assembling to attack the empire . Leia unable to contact Luke and needing to return to the alliance go forward with their dangerous plan to rescue solo from jabba.
Cut vader arrival
Cut Droid entrance and any instance of them at jabbas. Recolor 3p0 if he has to be present and cut his dialogue.
Move the Emporer arrival to the 1st scene.
Move Lapti Nek to second (old school version with different more appropriate music.
Add subtitles explaining that jabba found out about coded transmissions came from Oolas room last night,she argues, cut to a shot of Lando indicating it was him. he called from her room wink wink… she’s rancor food
Continuing with The Boshh interaction with the Han solo in Carbonite reveal added in front cut Droid scene somewhere.
Cut to luke/vader/lightsaber construction. Matte out 3p0 in cave entrance to be dagobah, then Yoda death
Add obwan would have told you if I let him line.
Cut Ben scene for use later
Insert/create luke feels Leia in trouble by his x wing/luke flying out of dagobah/luke talking to 3p0 on comlink, hasnt herd from lando chewie or the princess in days.
Luke entrance, Cgi a lightsaber on him, when he falls it falls off. He can’t find it. He runs in the other room, when he finally sees it rancor steps on it so he throws the rock continue to the sarlacc
Sarlacc old school no beak. Lando is now wearing the lights aber on his belt that’s where he gets it not r2 it continues normally but right when boba fett lands a Lazer blast knocks him off and he rolls into the sarlacc pit. Blow up the sail barge and make it to the alliance, luke doesn’t need to be late.

That’s part one.

Thanks for playing.