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darth_ender
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STAR WARS: EP VI -RETURN OF THE JEDI "REVISITED EDITION"ADYWAN - ** PRODUCTION HAS NOW RESTARTED **
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2-Sep-2017, 12:47 PM

Nerosun said:

I would like to have a visible shield for the deathstar where, on the first approach of the rebels, ships are shattering! For example, in Rogue One, on Scraif by the Planetshield

I like this idea. Jambe Davdar included a supposed original but unused sound effect on Returning to Jedi and his own special effects of the ships crashing into the shield.

I hope for the inclusion of several deleted scenes that I think would add dramatic tension or character development: Luke building his lightsaber; colorized pilots; the Falcon gunners; and perhaps most importantly, Jerjerrod’s conflict. I feel this could have truly made the climax more powerful.

I have several ideas, but I hesitate to overwhelm Ady. As many will recall, I started a thread for a collaborative edit long ago. It was a pipe dream to be sure, but I feel there were many good ideas that could only be implemented by someone like Adywan. My ROTJ rough workprint is pretty crappy but I feel it showcased some ideas well enough, including/especially Jerjerrod’s conflict.