The dialog works for me. Music could be a tad louder to sell it. It could build to a crescendo and cut out when Palps touches him, ending on MJ’s ow! from the song.
This will really sell the song I think, I like it.
Post #1101982
- Author
- dahmage
- Parent topic
- Episode III: Revenge of the Ridiculousness
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- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1101982/action/topic#1101982
- Date created
- 26-Aug-2017, 6:57 AM