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Post #1097732

Author
Depheros
Parent topic
Phildesfr's Blu-Ray Complete Set
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https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1097732/action/topic#1097732
Date created
14-Aug-2017, 2:09 AM

Thanks phildesfr, everything’s awesome as usual. I noticed a few tiny errors here and there, hope you don’t mind me making some suggestions.

  • Copyright dates should probably be updated from 2016 to 2017
  • TFA Copyright date should be 2015-2017
  • Rogue One Copyright date should be 2016-2017
  • ‘Concept Arts’ should probably be ‘Concept Art’ (drop the S)
  • Bottom text is missing an ‘and’ where it says: “Dolby” the double-D logo
  • In the AOTC text, ‘including’ is misspelled as 'incluing’
    And it looks like there’s an extra space between ‘meant to be’ and ‘seen’
  • ROTS text should probably say ‘CLONE WARS’ instead of ‘CLONE WAR’ (not sure)
    Also there’s a typo where it says ‘final chapter is’ instead of ‘final chapter in’

Of course your designs are really awesome just how they are. Thanks again, I appreciate you sharing your great creations.