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Post #1090122

Author
nightstalkerpoet
Parent topic
Rise of the Rebellion: A Rogue One Edit
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Date created
14-Jul-2017, 5:42 PM

Perhaps it’s just me, but your crawl wording is great with one exception. I would suggest “Imperial” be added before Director Krennic.