Something seems off about the text of the crawl… too much space. And it would flow smoother if the pan went up to the shot of the shuttle flying by the ring instead of inserting a new shot.
Post #1090045
- Author
- yotsuya
- Parent topic
- Rise of the Rebellion: A Rogue One Edit (Released)
- Link to post in topic
- https://originaltrilogy.com/post/id/1090045/action/topic#1090045
- Date created
- 14-Jul-2017, 11:36 AM