Well, after some tweaks, here is what I have. Opinions?
https://vimeo.com/224665998
password: 81crawlhd
I updated the video file. I had noticed that the crawl was cut off (where the BR letterboxing cut it off) and I tried to add it in from the 35 mm. But it doesn’t work and I will be removing it. But the rest of the crawl has been improved.