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Post #1087984

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thejediknighthusezni
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Scriptwriting Random Thoughts
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4-Jul-2017, 1:50 AM

Muslim experienced in tracking German gas warfare units. Says if hydrogen gas explodes on ground most will be pushed across the surface and must take out to sea or high in the air to disperse. Trevor asks them to clear his path to plane. Confused German shoots out engine trying to stop Trevor. Engine on fire Trevor realizes he won’t reach sea.
WW and Aries spiral together up into sky lightning power frying WW, Aries says only god can kill a god and now he will send her to Hades, WW says then we will go there together, last of her strength crashes gauntlets.

WW never a Roid Rangerette. Set apart from Amazons and accentuates female. No lesbo-homo-Baphomet-eroticism.

DCEU: RECONSIDERED

No SM:MOS, drop everyone into action ANH style in BvS, let them figure out with little expo drops that world is just now discovering SM, chaos and Metropolis(Manhattan) is being ripped apart in fight, Bats comes from Gotham(Bronx Kings Queens establishing shot at the beginning), Supes origin flashback recording at Fortress and Bats origin while drinking in cave, no Lois yet, mysterious brunette keeps appearing at odd moments, Supes was trying to stop destruction, everyone questions, Young Lex superindustrialist and Joker world’s supercriminal meet to discuss implications philosophy future twisted jokes they hit it off partnership, Examine ship, Joker only able to get a little Kryptonite powder Lex transforms it into inhaled poison for Supes that affects his mood and reduces his powers and makes it all erratic agitated, Lex plants false info about Bats and Joker plants false info about Supes escalating distrust and fear. Lex and Joker capture WW and tie her with Lasso explain plan, While BvS fight Lex and Joker see about creating Doom something goes wrong and Doom unleashed more quickly than expected, WW gets loose and tries to stop Doom but needs help runs and stops fight just before sink on Supes, says come with me or I will kill both of you, helps Supes up and leads them to Doom. Lex and Joker captured in neighboring cells, WW regaining strength Supes greatly weakened Bats trying to control his demons.

Well, I think I’m done with DC stuff for foreseeable future. Anyone else have thoughts?