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Post #1086357

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DigMod
Parent topic
TFA: A Gentle Restructure (Released)
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Date created
27-Jun-2017, 9:06 PM

Is there anyway to soften Akbar’s “all craft” line. His voice is too strong in contrast with his next lines. Also, the music, as Never pointed out, is off. I’m not sure you can make the music work here. The chord structures are very different as are the tempos and mood. Perhaps you could extend the sounds from the original next scene that followed Akbar and slowly fade them out into the scene you have now?