Overdub all droids and aliens including Grievious and the doctor droids at the end. The whole idea of her losing the will to live is stupid. Also, the whole exchange between Padme and Anakin on her beuty can be cut too, completely unneccessary, just drop the whole thing. I think also dropping the dreams would be good too, I'm trying to remember if in Episode II they showed dreams and I don't think they did. And of course the Vader scream needs changed.