Hey man!! Sorry this is so late, here are some notes I took, not extensive!

TECHNICAL ISSUES:
When Obi-Wan and Anakin land in the separatist hanger it is really quite without the scrapping of the ships. Not sure if this is something you can add back in.
When the destroyers show up it sounds like Obi-Wan is saying something but it is inaudible.
When the droids say “hands up jedi” it just sounds really weird. Especially since we’re basing this off the Clone Wars with their goofy droids I feel like the original voice should remain. This goes for when you have the super battle droids speak (I think having them speak less is good)
When Anakin kicks Dooku you might want to add a sound effect so that the kick has some weight to it.
I think you should leave the line “His fate…” but that’s just my opinion
The musical transition between Padme and the Jedi temple is very janky, not sure what you could do though.

Aside from a few more kinks which shouldn’t be too hard to see and some others have already pointed them out, I really really like this edit. It does capture Anakin’s fall and his friendship with Obi-Wan very well. You did a great job matching this to the Clone Wars. Now with just a few tweaks here and there it is going to be amazing!