I’m a big fan of this edit. A lot of the changes work for me. I took notes of the problems I had while watching, but I understand that this is unfinished so it’s likely the technical problems will be ironed out before release.

[7:45] Added dialogue is WAY too quiet.

[9:41] I would have preferred that you kept the whole “no loose wire jokes” conversation; with part of it cut out, the conversation feels too abrupt. I also thought it was one of the funniest parts of a mostly unfunny movie, so it’s a shame that it’s missing, IMO.

[20:40 and 21:04] Added dialogue is a bit too quiet.

[26:49] I could tell that “forgive me” was cut short, I’m not sure what you could do to remedy that, though.

[27:34 and 44:20] Not really a criticism of the edit, but Hal9000 has some upscaled deleted scenes on MySpleen, if you have an account; if not, feel free to PM me for them.

In the Darth Plagueis scene, I personally would’ve cut it like so;

“He could even keep the ones he cared about from dying.”

“Is it possible to learn this power?”

Anakin asking if Plagueis could actually save people from death seems like a dumb question to me, seeing as that’s what Palpatine just said.

[43:24] Music change is too sudden. Maybe crossfading the two audio tracks would help?